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The Knight's Farewell
Hello,I just finished reading your story, and I absolutely adored it! Your writing is incredible, and I couldn’t stop imagining how fantastic it would look as a comic. I’m a professional commissioned artist, and I’d be thrilled to adapt your story into a comic format. No pressure, of course. I just think your work would shine in that medium. If you’re interested, feel free to reach out to me on Discord (lizziedoesitall). Let me know your thoughts! Best, Lizzie
lizziedoesitall
The Knight's Farewell
I just finished reading your story and wanted to say it was fantastic so real and cinematic! It really felt like it could become an incredible comic. I’m a freelance artist specializing in turning stories into compelling visuals, and I’d love to help bring your world to life through art. No pressure, if you’re interested, feel free to connect! Email: [email protected] X: Harper_C1ark Discord: Harper_clark
Harper Clark
The Knight's Farewell
You've written a great story! I really liked it. However, it has some errors. Here's one: (Chap. 4) Soon after saying "There was a silence in his mind as the letter fell from his hands, drifting to the ground." you say "He just stood there, the letter clutched in his fist, the air thick around him." It affects the continuity of your narrative because one wonders how the letter that had fallen to the ground got back into Elias' hands. There is at least one spelling error too. Overall, very good!
Raju Chacko